A Creak in the Night
By Gail Balentine
We went downstairs
after spending half an hour packing Jim’s bag for a single
overnight; he had changed his mind at least three times on every item
he put in the bag. I knew he was
stalling, nervous to leave me alone.
“There, you’re
all set. Now go. Mike will be upset if you’re not there to greet
everybody. You know how he gets.” He put the bag
down. “Yeah, yeah, I know. But, well, are you sure you’ll be all
right? It’s been a long time since I’ve had to travel for business. Besides, it’s
stupid to have to spend a whole weekend
on one sales pitch. I could just …”
“Jim,” I put my
hands on his shoulders, “I’m a big girl. I’ll be fine. The
doors all have good locks and we’ve lived here a long time
problem-free. Go, and try to look
like you want to be there.”
The next thing I
knew he grabbed me, bent me backwards, and planted a dizzying kiss in
true Hollywood style. When he set me back upright, and while I caught
my breath, he wiggled his
eyebrows and said, “I could tell Mike I came down with the plague
and stay here with you. We could …”
“Down, Romeo.”
I laughed. “We aren’t that young anymore.
Go, please.”
Reluctantly, he
picked up his overnight bag and headed for the door. “I’ll call
when I get there. Wish the kids were still home. Wish Scout was still
here. We need to get
another dog …”
At that point I
fairly pushed him out the door. “I promise, I’ll be fine. You’ll
be home before you know it. I love you. Bye.”
Within ten minutes
I was in my favorite chair, glass of wine and sandwich beside me,
reading the kind of romance story that Jim loved to tease me about. I
was so enthralled that, an hour and a half
later, when my cell phone rang, I jumped. Jim was at the hotel, about
to go into dinner. By eleven o’clock
I had finished my book, two glasses of wine, plugged my phone into
the charger, checked all the doors and headed up to bed. I fell
asleep the minute my head hit the pillow.
What was that
noise?
With a start I woke out of a sound sleep and sat up straight. I lay back down and
waited. Then it happened. The floor creaked in the living room - that
spot three feet from the front door that I’d asked Jim to fix many
times.
Did Jim come home?
Well, I decided, he’ll get a good piece of my mind for scaring me
like this.
I got up, went to
the top of the stairs and looked over the railing. Someone was
standing in the doorway to the living room, dressed all in black. Not
Jim. I pulled back, flattened against
the wall, and my heart started slamming against my chest like a
jackhammer.
Who is that? The
grandfather clock chimed twice. “Two o’clock? A burglar?” I headed for the
phone until I remembered it was charging downstairs.
Damn!
What now? Stop, I
ordered myself, and think! Maybe he’ll take the money in my purse
and … and the silver on the hutch and … and just go? A cough. He was
closer - coming up the stairs. Think! Move! A
weapon! Tommy’s baseball bat? Can I get to the closet? Will he see
me? Too late ….
“Mom? What’re
you doing up?’ Tommy pushed back his hoodie and grinned.
“Surprise!”
Love your talent at building suspense, Gail! Thoroughly enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteGail, I knew the story, yet it caught me again! A great short piece with much detail. Can't wait for your novel.
ReplyDeleteThank you both. Your opinions mean a lot to me. :)
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